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The_Hobbit
Bilbo Baggins
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Write a poem
#4109447 - 04/29/05 12:28 AM (18 years, 10 months ago) |
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This thread dedicated to writing poems.
I'm not big on poetry, but I'm bored and I have time to waste.
I'm sitting here thinking about my life I have everything to look forward to and everything to do But I'm still sitting here, not doing anything and feeling blue Why do I choose to live this way, what should I do Should I question the meaning of my situation, or just stare into the distance without thought Should I find something to do, to insure that I'm not waisting my time Or should I be content just sitting here, feeling fine I don't know how I could feel good and bad at the same time, but somehow I pull it off Sometimes I don't understand myself and it scares me I wonder if everyone else feels the way that I do I wonder if I'm scaring myself for no reason - Maybe I'm normal Maybe there is no normal, maybe there is no meaning Maybe there is a God and he's looking at me right now, waisting my life The only thing I want right now is to find love Everything else is secondary because I feel so alone I hope the girl I'm hitting on feels the same way I hope she realizes that I'm genuine even when I have nothing to say I hope she lets me in so we can be together We might not have a future, but atleast for now we could have eachother Then maybe I wouldn't feel this way I wouldn't have to question my existence, I would be happy living for today
Some parts rhyme. Others don't. I just wanted to get my thoughts down.
-------------------- Smoking my hobbit leaf... Please keep in mind that I am just a human being. Please read my posts carefully and interpret their meaning for yourself.
Edited by hobbitcg (04/29/05 12:45 AM)
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Todcasil
rogue DMT elf
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4/28/05 10:34 pm - untitled i know you smile but if you knew my smiles youd close your eyes and in your mind youd see you and i see this is plenty beautiful.
you can kid around all youd like but ill tell you now i disregard any disregard you send my way- wayward jaypegs collapse in my lens
but the beauty inside is worth all the cries and the notion of you is worth every possibility
i know you smile but if you knew my smiles i know you smile you should know my smile
~Todcasil
-------------------- Men look at themselves and they see flawed humans, we look at women and we see perfect GODDESSES Women look at themselves and they seem utterly human, when looking at men they see proud GODS. ~Casil
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Todcasil
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Quote:
hobbitcg said: This thread dedicated to writing poems. Don't post unless you're posting a poem that you wrote.
I'm not big on poetry, but I'm bored and I have time to waste.
I'm sitting here thinking about my life I have everything to look forward to and everything to do But I'm still sitting here, not doing anything and feeling blue Why do I choose to live this way, what should I do Should I question the meaning of my situation, or just stare into the distance without thought Should I find something to do, to insure that I'm not waisting my time Or should I be content just sitting here, feeling fine I don't know how I could feel good and bad at the same time, but somehow I pull it off Sometimes I don't understand myself and it scares me I wonder if everyone else feels the way that I do I wonder if I'm scaring myself for no reason - Maybe I'm normal Maybe there is no normal, maybe there is no meaning Maybe there is a God and he's looking at me right now, waisting my life The only thing I want right now is to find love Everything else is secondary because I feel so alone I hope the girl I'm hitting on feels the same way I hope she realizes that I'm genuine even when I have nothing to say I hope she lets me in so we can be together We might not have a future, but atleast for now we could have eachother Then maybe I wouldn't feel this way I wouldn't have to question my existence, I would be happy living for today
Some parts rhyme. Others don't. I just wanted to get my thoughts down.
i really enjoyed reading your mind <3 beautiful poem.
-------------------- Men look at themselves and they see flawed humans, we look at women and we see perfect GODDESSES Women look at themselves and they seem utterly human, when looking at men they see proud GODS. ~Casil
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emptywisdom
simple being oflight
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Re: Write a poem [Re: Todcasil]
#4109502 - 04/29/05 12:50 AM (18 years, 10 months ago) |
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who knows what goes on behind the lines seperateing me from you from the world that surrounds us with some frantic flurry of confusion is a choice to be made by some great mind behind all these scenes which seem to happen only to the untrained eye of the soul precieves eternity and all and everything else happens to be this moment happening as I write right now is the only time to fly in the present is the most on may hope for.
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emptywisdom
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here's a little tiny thing I put down back in november while on 2cI. It's really nothing special sober, but while your tripping it packs a real punch concerning the actions of our nation in regards to Iraq and the war on terror.
Urination of desperate recovery scared dog bites infared lights bombs through the nights baghdad times fall from vultures in the sky
If you're fond of sand dunes
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Todcasil
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i really like that one emptywisdom...
-------------------- Men look at themselves and they see flawed humans, we look at women and we see perfect GODDESSES Women look at themselves and they seem utterly human, when looking at men they see proud GODS. ~Casil
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emptywisdom
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Re: Write a poem [Re: Todcasil]
#4109565 - 04/29/05 01:28 AM (18 years, 10 months ago) |
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thanks, I love to write, even if it does'nt alway turn out pretty.
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Todcasil
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pretty is subjective to the observer
-------------------- Men look at themselves and they see flawed humans, we look at women and we see perfect GODDESSES Women look at themselves and they seem utterly human, when looking at men they see proud GODS. ~Casil
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Mushie_Man
Fuck Up
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Re: Write a poem [Re: Todcasil]
#4119290 - 05/01/05 03:48 PM (18 years, 10 months ago) |
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Erased: Kinda queer, Eh?
-------------------- Ecstacy got me standing next to you Getting sentimental as fuck spillin' guts to you We just met But I think I'm in love with you But you're on it too So you tell me you love me too Wake up in the morning like "yo, what the fuck we do?"
Edited by Mushie_Man (05/01/05 04:50 PM)
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HELLA_TIGHT
Madge the Smoking Vag
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my heart hurtz sew bad only a bullet implant will fix me, nah mean??
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PawPaw
Picktish TexasStyle....
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Ya know poems kinda suck
-------------------- Come to Paw Paws place there will be no sleeping tonight Eric just wants to catch reds .. Don?t look back, don?t look back He?s right on your trail Don?t look back, don?t look back He?s just a step away from hell WDYWFM?
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HELLA_TIGHT
Madge the Smoking Vag
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Quote:
HELLA_TIGHT said: my heart hurtz sew bad only a bullet implant will fix me, nah mean??
hey paw, suck me off while i massage your testis fountains of semen
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Corporal Kielbasa
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Quote:
HELLA_TIGHT said:
Quote:
HELLA_TIGHT said: my heart hurtz sew bad only a bullet implant will fix me, nah mean??
hey paw, suck me off while i massage your testis fountains of semen
edit* testi not plural
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PawPaw
Picktish TexasStyle....
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Oh boy a poem
-------------------- Come to Paw Paws place there will be no sleeping tonight Eric just wants to catch reds .. Don?t look back, don?t look back He?s right on your trail Don?t look back, don?t look back He?s just a step away from hell WDYWFM?
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emptywisdom
simple being oflight
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I'm glad to see this thread come back to life.
I'll add a little something in a bit.
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HELLA_TIGHT
Madge the Smoking Vag
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my haiku's crush souls gangster as nemo, fer real i will stab your face
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Mushie_Man
Fuck Up
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If you look your rhymes kinda suck why dont you get lost nobody gives a fuck coz` obviously u lack a life probially take your wrists to a knife everynight on your own waiting for a single call on your phone as the knife finally reaches the bone
-------------------- Ecstacy got me standing next to you Getting sentimental as fuck spillin' guts to you We just met But I think I'm in love with you But you're on it too So you tell me you love me too Wake up in the morning like "yo, what the fuck we do?"
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Corporal Kielbasa
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dude you are probably walking home alone playing with your lil bone.....
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Mushie_Man
Fuck Up
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Quote:
SHEIKofSHIITAKE said: dude you are probably walking home alone playing with your lil bone.....
with your penis shown talkin on the phone jacking off to some chick who secretly has a dick but you dont care you have enough seamen to spare
-------------------- Ecstacy got me standing next to you Getting sentimental as fuck spillin' guts to you We just met But I think I'm in love with you But you're on it too So you tell me you love me too Wake up in the morning like "yo, what the fuck we do?"
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Kada
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I like pizza steve, the kind with mushies and pepperoni, I like pizza steve, when i am crying and am lonley.
i got this pizza for free, cause i killed the pizza man, i got this pizza for free, i did it, cause i can.
Whiskey makes me pee.
(no pizza guys were actually harmed during the making of this poem.)
-------------------- ~The Cultivators Motherload~ "I am free, no matter what rules surround me. If I find them tolerable, I tolerate them; if I find them too obnoxious, I break them. I am free because I know that I alone am morally responsible for everything I do." -Robert A. Heinlein "There is no need for temples, no need for complicated philosophies. My brain and my heart are my temples; my philosophy is kindness."-Dalai Lama Live long and prosper.
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