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OfflineJon
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another poem by SonofaMAN
    #3758140 - 02/09/05 07:16 PM (19 years, 1 month ago)

I like this poem because it took me over a year to write. Every couple of months I added a rhyme to this crazy contraption. Heres how it ended up.

A feeling without senses
Threw the thought over a cliff
Life seen through other lenses
Made my activity stiff
Conclusion collided with whatever began
Sitting on ice waiting blisses arrival
People sit and watch a burning man
The ass of life became the worlds idol
My ashes are cradled in the warmth of the sea
Raging bull tranquil over damp emotions
The cattle jumped off cliffs even though they were free
Imagine if diamonds covered the oceans
I see a small island, this is my prime perspective
Ill live there with every bending probability
The infestation called humanity became less selective
And beautifying creation became my ability

I thought this rolled off the toungue nicely. Im gonna start learning the sitar soon, does anyone have any suggestions for good learning books or videos?

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Re: another poem by SonofaMAN [Re: Jon]
    #3758161 - 02/09/05 07:22 PM (19 years, 1 month ago)

I like it. It seems symbolic in many aspects... if i may: What was the poem influenced by.

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Re: another poem by SonofaMAN [Re: Freeker]
    #3758582 - 02/09/05 08:42 PM (19 years, 1 month ago)

Ever since this bad shroom trip, my life went more towards transcendentalism. And I seems to find ways to put myself on paper by allowing certain elements of my thinking process to be expressed. Every sentence in that poem was given alot of thought, but it didnt necessarily have to make sense. Im glad you liked it.

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Re: another poem by SonofaMAN [Re: Jon]
    #3758605 - 02/09/05 08:46 PM (19 years, 1 month ago)

you have a gift with words.

I especially like the last 4 lines

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