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Haiku Chain
#18984850 - 10/16/13 05:12 AM (10 years, 5 months ago) |
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Haiku is a three line poem written with the first line 5 syllables, the second line seven syllables and the third line 5 syllables.
To chain the Haiku together we use the last line of the previous haiku as the first line in the haiku we are writing. It doesn't have to rhyme, you can just say what is on your mind or write something deep and meaningful or just be funny.
I think if we chain our Haiku's together we can build an epic story of amusement and tragedy.
I'll start:
Time is on my mind, Blind, I can not seem to find, What ticks the clocks tock?
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Re: Haiku Chain [Re: teknix]
#18985820 - 10/16/13 11:54 AM (10 years, 5 months ago) |
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What ticks the clocks tock, And trickles blood to my cock, Like some good hard rock?
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Like some good hard rock? The glock remains clocked to talk, A silent whisper.
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Re: Haiku Chain [Re: teknix]
#19012034 - 10/22/13 02:44 AM (10 years, 5 months ago) |
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Tokyo Godfathers has some haiku in it on netflix
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Re: Haiku Chain [Re: teknix]
#19025622 - 10/24/13 01:15 PM (10 years, 5 months ago) |
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teknix said: Time is on my mind, Blind, I can not seem to find, What ticks the clocks tock?
Ah, the mystery. When sight and seen are complete. Who looks through these eyes?
-------------------- Ah, the mystery. When sight and seen are complete, who looks through these eyes? All words are lies. This statement, too, is false.
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Who looks through these eyes? Empathetically, I, Those who choose to peer.
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Re: Haiku Chain [Re: teknix]
#19141671 - 11/15/13 04:54 PM (10 years, 4 months ago) |
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Those who choose to peer, Your death is nothing to fear, an infinite sphere.
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Re: Haiku Chain [Re: teknix]
#19160183 - 11/19/13 03:25 PM (10 years, 4 months ago) |
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an infinite sphere dipped halfway into a dew unable to spin
-------------------- ---The mystics subjective experience of his identity with "the All" is the scientist's objective description of the ecological relationship of the organism/environment as a unified field - Alan Watts, The Joyous Cosmology An excellent, rather short read here----
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Re: Haiku Chain [Re: N2ocean]
#19170534 - 11/21/13 03:10 PM (10 years, 4 months ago) |
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Unable to spin, Never daunted by my sigh... I choose to get by.
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I choose to get by, bye and bye, the world goes by, The blink of an eye.
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Re: Haiku Chain [Re: teknix]
#19214581 - 12/01/13 08:25 PM (10 years, 3 months ago) |
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The blink of an eye, Closed, opened for a second, Shutting out the light.
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Re: Haiku Chain [Re: teknix]
#19214618 - 12/01/13 08:32 PM (10 years, 3 months ago) |
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Shutting out the light Mind's eye closing to the sun Hopes it opens soon
-------------------- ~Scarab74 We are such stuff as dreams are made of. W. Shakespeare - The Tempest
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Re: Haiku Chain [Re: Scarab74]
#19229837 - 12/05/13 01:54 AM (10 years, 3 months ago) |
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Hope it opens soon, Wanting as the light turns gloom, Bleak desire breeds ruin.
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Re: Haiku Chain [Re: teknix]
#19348043 - 12/30/13 07:18 PM (10 years, 2 months ago) |
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Bleak desire breeds ruin, Life and living gone so soon, Awakening blooms.
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Re: Haiku Chain [Re: teknix]
#19348391 - 12/30/13 08:27 PM (10 years, 2 months ago) |
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Awakening blooms, Spirits slowly seep from me, They laugh as I die.......................
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They laugh as I die....................... not ready...im not yet done!!! haiku's are such fun
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Not ready...I'm not, Her shadow on my wall cries, I listen all night
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I listen all night My mind fails to fall silent Breathe and innervate
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Re: Haiku Chain [Re: Tehbearz]
#19400981 - 01/10/14 08:18 PM (10 years, 2 months ago) |
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Breathe and innervate, Another place I awake, In a painless state.
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Re: Haiku Chain [Re: teknix]
#19402056 - 01/11/14 01:32 AM (10 years, 2 months ago) |
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In a painless state, Awaiting the ending wake, From this empty wait.
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