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First line last line poety. 1
#17471852 - 12/30/12 03:39 PM (11 years, 3 months ago) |
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Ok Shroominites I know there are some poets out there. This is the last line first line poetry thread. The poem below ends with a line and the next person has to use the last line for there first line.
The snow is falling down once again it makes me frown nothing to do but light a blunt and think about next years mushroom hunt
Sometime in the spring when the birds start to sing Ill light another blunt and go on my mushroom hunt
And find the things I like the most a Gymonpilus on its host or just a good edible that will make life incredible.
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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Eddeee]
#17476218 - 12/31/12 11:41 AM (11 years, 3 months ago) |
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That will make life incredible if our skins where shredable to grow them back again in a totally different skin
To live for change so we can arrange everything that comes our way only if we want that day
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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Eddeee]
#17480910 - 01/01/13 01:06 PM (11 years, 3 months ago) |
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only if we want that day to come where I have to say please write a line or four and if you want write some more
so come on First line last line don;t make it all mine come on its lonely in here cuz only 15 people have peered
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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Eddeee] 1
#17484874 - 01/02/13 06:27 AM (11 years, 3 months ago) |
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cuz only 15 people have peered straight into the bright new day of all of those that dared to stray; only two remain
cast down was one touched too harshly by the sun the second wandered longer forever to be stronger
cast your eyes upwards live no more as drunkards stare long enough and you'll find truth or forever remain existing in youth
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( that was awesome thanks for your mind )
Or forever remain existing in youth because there you think you'll find truth when in truth aging reveals the unknown path of good and evil and all its wrath
or perhaps its better to just lie still take another blotter just for the thrill just to watch the walls breath while inside you secretly grieve.
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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Eddeee]
#17488951 - 01/02/13 09:42 PM (11 years, 3 months ago) |
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While inside you secretly grieve The plastic smile remains still There is more than they perceive Your mind decayed, your soul ill.
The pain lasts for days and days There's no sun to light your path When all the world is made of grays There must come divine inner wrath.
Inferno rising, destroying the pain Storm of swords, killing the liar Crush it, you have everything to gain When purified by sacred fire.
(inspired by my depressive episodes)
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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Eddeee]
#17489041 - 01/02/13 10:05 PM (11 years, 3 months ago) |
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while you secretly grieve, the voices dont leave, heard like breeze through trees, this voice is never pleased the more innocent bleed the more it seems to me that the voices that i mean are all just a dream in between the seams of this never ending scheme
How charade are all the bystanders adding their taxes while those who stand ready sharpen their axes money coffers will be made into burnt offers igniting a blaze inextinguishable by water burning away that damn whore, Babylons daughter.
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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: AcidBath]
#17490359 - 01/03/13 07:30 AM (11 years, 3 months ago) |
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Burning away that damn whore, Babylons daughter Under house arrest (aint that oughta?) But with mansions like these Where we do as we please Is it any wonder no-one yet caught her?
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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Buster_Brown]
#17490550 - 01/03/13 08:36 AM (11 years, 3 months ago) |
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Is it any wonder no one yet caught her nor sought the essence of her lure her eyes looking deep inside you your one of the the very few
to gaze upon her unknown world deep inside you knew that girl you and her had it all but that was before the fall
and now like the each day she has gone her own way just to be the past that you thought would always last
(In regards to Apep the wanderer very nice}
when purified by sacred fire brings forth a mind that keeps itself wired and the things we thought of most were lost in some one else post
so I look and the white and grey hoping for the day the sun shines again then broken heart will mend
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Edited by Eddeee (01/03/13 10:46 AM)
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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Eddeee]
#17494271 - 01/03/13 09:38 PM (11 years, 3 months ago) |
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Then broken heart will mend Because of the garden of the soul That you did graciously tend Planting love in that great hole
Gentle rains do come, healing And new life erupts forth As the scabs fade away, peeling Filled with hope, I turn north
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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Apep]
#17494442 - 01/03/13 10:13 PM (11 years, 3 months ago) |
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Filled with hope I turn north then think of days a head and what they may bring forth I remembered what you said
I remember those words like it was yesterday when we sat and ate cheese curds and you wanted to play
you said those were the good ol days that was when we had it right and we knew our ways toward the purple light
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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Eddeee]
#17497258 - 01/04/13 02:23 PM (11 years, 3 months ago) |
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toward the purple light with no end in sight I look for the good fight to end my plight.
And whats wrong with you and all that acting blue YOU act like nothing new did you think it was all true
you did not have to believe nor did you have to see in order to be free you just have to leave.
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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Eddeee]
#17500344 - 01/05/13 02:36 AM (11 years, 3 months ago) |
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You just have to leave when they all start to seethe. Their green faces are mean and melting like dreams, and you just want to scream Cause the pain in your mind is affecting your spleen! and your shit eating grin is too plasticene! They know, and the scene is becoming obscene! You gotta run like the wind!Fly away!Flee! Believe me, the world is not as it seems!
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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Biopunk]
#17500597 - 01/05/13 05:59 AM (11 years, 3 months ago) |
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Believe me the world is not as it seems its all someones dream which makes you think you can grow but really you don't know you think you can but you can;t so all there is to do is rant about how cruel the world can be if you could you'd set yourself free
when you find out about all this it will just make you piss and make you feel blue like getting over the flue so good luck don't get stuck all you have to do is not give a fuck
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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Eddeee]
#17501369 - 01/05/13 11:06 AM (11 years, 3 months ago) |
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All you have to do is not give a fuck Get an inflatable pool all filled up with ducks and leave it to sit in the back of a truck Now dive in as they fit and get down in the muck And grab up some shit. 2 handfulls, you must! Then say with a grin,"I GIVE SHITS, NOT FUCKS!"
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Edited by Biopunk (01/05/13 11:20 AM)
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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Biopunk]
#17501914 - 01/05/13 01:28 PM (11 years, 3 months ago) |
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Then say with a grin I give shits not fucks but wouldn't that just be bad luck If the girl of your dreams was there and she told you "that is just not fair" you have to listen because she knows what your thinking really blows isn't it better to shake your head look around and head off to bed to dream again of future days that will bring better lays
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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Eddeee]
#17506689 - 01/06/13 11:47 AM (11 years, 3 months ago) |
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that will bring you better lays but then you can change your ways and turn in a different direction look in a mirror and make the connection
go to collage and get some knowledge buy some land to save a tree to love the earth that is key
your in charge now so its up to you what to allow In this new life you have won now its time to have some fun
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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Eddeee]
#17508893 - 01/06/13 07:43 PM (11 years, 3 months ago) |
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Now its time to have some fun Its my birthday man sun of a gun another day another year goes by so fast it makes you fear so count your blessings and remove those battle dressings put a way the good fight and lets all go party tonight
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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: Eddeee]
#17510673 - 01/07/13 05:50 AM (11 years, 3 months ago) |
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And let's all go party tonight Two days pass and you hand me a light I drag it in and blow out the tar Some how we left a deer in the in the car The mushrooms are missing the the lesbians are still kissing The night will close in and the stars will still grin Psilocybin still dabbles in the blood, LSD still simmers on my chin
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Re: First line last line poety. [Re: circastes]
#17511285 - 01/07/13 09:58 AM (11 years, 3 months ago) |
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(nice thanks for that)
Psilocybin still dabbles in the blood,LSD still simmers on my chin and in the morning i realized it was not a sin except in the minds of those you call kin. wow what a party last night I never saw so many a sight almost walked into the light but they all said don't go stay here and watch the show if you do then you will know I opened my eye and I started to fly and I never asked why But in the end my mind did bend and my soul did mend and all is well it wasn't hell it was a good sell in which I bought a little thought on a little paper that I sought
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