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 sadspacemonkey
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 i am a poet and i know it 
#10220538 - 04/23/09 02:25 PM (14 years, 11 months ago) |
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I just finished writing this poem and would appreciate any feedback.
Thanks! <3
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a little man called trouble underfoot now
but still
trying to find that curve of a smile inside of myself
tender touch of glowing finger softly unfolds delicate inner layers
unveiling some gorgeous chaos
angels and demons wrestling making love playing house playing mother father doctor priest
while i sit here holding it all in
nothing to do now except wait
tick tock clock in this waiting room drives me insane
i enter this muscle of a brain and wreck havoc on my vision
it chops up what's whole
false little compartments
false understandings
but now everything seems smaller than me
me, overinflated balloon colossus
my vision razor sharp
can slay you into a million pieces
does that make me greater?
or just the greater fool
than the man without a head?
so bored of it all!
and a little mad
nothing can capture me i move so fast
firecracker heart ready to ooze
strawberry goo
the honeybees get off sucking me
this flower is sweet
lick my nectar before it weighs me down
drags me down to the ground and drowns
tell a simple story of remembering
wanting to return so bad i feed my desire with a thousand plastic toys
wake up, put them down, remember my love for you
travel through space time on the neon pink colored body
riding you through this intergalactic love story that lasts forever and ever till it ends and starts again
cowgirl rides her animal yodeling to the stars and listens for the return
her other half in another dimension
a billion light years away
feel her-him together!
as one
so full it's bursting at the seams
wanting to explode all this love out of my body and let it splatter the masses
getting them wet and glowing they dance in the streets, trample the skins of my body and i live!
yes, go ahead and glide
down the dripping softness of my back
let it all just slip and flow and now you're skating across the surface of Neptune
waters of cool blueberry filling you up
give up, fall inside
the lights on this party ship
creatures with tubes and tentacles and exotic vibes that make me sweat and heave
move it shake it all around
till you feel new
empty now
i can be your mirror
only my goal, the end in sight i know it now
no more striving
trying to impress
win you over win your win of who?
taking the time to laugh at the madness claiming sanity
the half-truths
they slip off my shoulders now
while i smile and keep running the race
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"I can't be told by anyone how to live. If I said to the minister 'Move from your home' he would think I was mad." Bushman : Botswana
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 deranger
Registered: 01/21/08
Posts: 6,840
Loc: off the wall
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Quote:
sadspacemonkey said:
empty now
i can be your mirror
only my goal, the end in sight i know it now
no more striving
trying to impress
win you over win your win of who?
taking the time to laugh at the madness claiming sanity
the half-truths
they slip off my shoulders now
while i smile and keep running the race
 
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sadspacemonkey
!universe!
Registered: 11/01/06
Posts: 376
Last seen: 7 years, 1 month
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 Re: i am a poet and i know it [Re: deranger]
#10222565 - 04/23/09 08:42 PM (14 years, 11 months ago) |
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thanks for reading~
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"I can't be told by anyone how to live. If I said to the minister 'Move from your home' he would think I was mad." Bushman : Botswana
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