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Kickle
A Dying Hope


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tossed salad and scrambled eggs
#16689236 - 08/12/12 09:15 PM (9 months, 3 days ago) |
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Once the sound was Twice the distraction But no more No more sound No more laughter No more trains at 6am No more horns or sirens or screams No more cheers or hiccups No more Can this be? Can such silence be? How should I know?
It is said that in Silence Deep within Silence There lay answers. But who hears them? Sounds like make-believe.
But is it any different than Hearing answers in the noise? Answers to burning questions Answers to how to live The way to look Who to respect How to respect them Oh it goes and goes But is this not make-believe too?
Make an answer if you want I am done with the distraction
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Re: tossed salad and scrambled eggs [Re: Kickle]
#16689244 - 08/12/12 09:16 PM (9 months, 3 days ago) |
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Nice. Did you write yourself?
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Kickle
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Re: tossed salad and scrambled eggs [Re: White Beard]
#16689343 - 08/12/12 09:35 PM (9 months, 3 days ago) |
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Yeah and what's weird is that right after writing it out I started doing something I haven't in quite some time. I started fleshing out some potential psychology studies.
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Re: tossed salad and scrambled eggs [Re: Kickle] 1
#16689375 - 08/12/12 09:39 PM (9 months, 3 days ago) |
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Kickle said: Once the sound was Twice the distraction But no more No more sound No more laughter No more trains at 6am No more horns or sirens or screams No more cheers or hiccups No more Can this be? Can such silence be? How should I know?
It is said that in Silence Deep within Silence There lay answers. But who hears them? Sounds like make-believe.
But is it any different than Hearing answers in the noise? Answers to burning questions Answers to how to live The way to look Who to respect How to respect them Oh it goes and goes But is this not make-believe too?
Make an answer if you want I am done with the distraction
Is this a suicide note?
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“under the present brutal and primitive conditions on this planet, every person you meet should be regarded as one of the walking wounded. we have never seen a man or woman not slightly deranged by either anxiety or grief. we have never seen a totally sane human being.”
― Robert Anton Wilson
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Re: tossed salad and scrambled eggs [Re: Kickle]
#16689387 - 08/12/12 09:41 PM (9 months, 3 days ago) |
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Wow, that was really well written. I'm honestly shocked. I feel like the ending kinda knocked me outta my chair. (Metaphorically )
Did you get your title for your post from the Becker Theme Song?
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Re: tossed salad and scrambled eggs [Re: Kickle]
#16689391 - 08/12/12 09:41 PM (9 months, 3 days ago) |
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Do you know why?
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Kickle
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Re: tossed salad and scrambled eggs [Re: Icelander]
#16689394 - 08/12/12 09:42 PM (9 months, 3 days ago) |
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maybe in a sense. surety-seppuku!
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Kickle
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Re: tossed salad and scrambled eggs [Re: r72rock]
#16689407 - 08/12/12 09:44 PM (9 months, 3 days ago) |
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r72rock
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Re: tossed salad and scrambled eggs [Re: Kickle]
#16689629 - 08/12/12 10:13 PM (9 months, 3 days ago) |
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Kickle said: and it's actually from Frasier
Whoops. I guess I need to touch up on my sitcoms more.
-------------------- Refraining from all evil, not clinging to birth and death, working in deep compassion for all sentient beings, respecting those over you and pitying those below you, without any detesting or desiring, worrying or lamentation - this is what is called Buddha. Do not search beyond it. - Dōgen
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Re: tossed salad and scrambled eggs [Re: Kickle]
#16689655 - 08/12/12 10:15 PM (9 months, 3 days ago) |
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nice writing kickle, i really enjoyed it !
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Re: tossed salad and scrambled eggs [Re: Kickle]
#16689786 - 08/12/12 10:35 PM (9 months, 3 days ago) |
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Kickle said: in an instant i stopped taking certain things for granted
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Re: tossed salad and scrambled eggs [Re: r72rock]
#16689841 - 08/12/12 10:41 PM (9 months, 3 days ago) |
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becker is an awesome show, but on the other hand, fraiser sucks
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Re: tossed salad and scrambled eggs [Re: Kickle] 2
#16690237 - 08/12/12 11:46 PM (9 months, 3 days ago) |
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Your poem brought me to the depths of an experiential realm where the experiencer ceases to be yet a sense of self still remains eventually collapsing in on itself to the poor bag of meat that struggles tooth and nail to think words that are mere skeletons to a now vanishing knowing.
-------------------- The intuitive mind is a sacred gift, and the rational mind is a faithful servant. We have created a society that honors the servant, and has forgotten the gift. - Albert Einstein
   
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Kickle
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Re: tossed salad and scrambled eggs [Re: c0sm0nautt]
#16690513 - 08/13/12 12:42 AM (9 months, 3 days ago) |
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Re: tossed salad and scrambled eggs [Re: Kickle]
#16693127 - 08/13/12 02:51 PM (9 months, 2 days ago) |
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Re: tossed salad and scrambled eggs [Re: The Chronic]
#16695447 - 08/13/12 09:45 PM (9 months, 2 days ago) |
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You had me until the last line:
I am done with the distraction
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Kickle
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Re: tossed salad and scrambled eggs [Re: Vore]
#16695743 - 08/13/12 10:47 PM (9 months, 2 days ago) |
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Oh?
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Vore

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Re: tossed salad and scrambled eggs [Re: Kickle]
#16695763 - 08/13/12 10:51 PM (9 months, 2 days ago) |
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Ya. That's where the silence stopped.
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Kickle
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Re: tossed salad and scrambled eggs [Re: Vore]
#16696007 - 08/13/12 11:44 PM (9 months, 2 days ago) |
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sounds like a good place to examine then
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Re: tossed salad and scrambled eggs [Re: Kickle]
#16697460 - 08/14/12 08:33 AM (9 months, 2 days ago) |
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noice Kickle!
-------------------- if only i
had learnt to count
i might know more
about a larger amount
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