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 Cosmicjoker
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 My new spiritual video, martin luther king rap, 2012 spiritual revolution! 
#15795799 - 02/11/12 11:39 PM (3 months, 15 days ago) |
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Hey everyone check out my new spiritual video, be sure to comment and tell me what you think good or bad. It is inspired by my love for Dr. Martin Luther King Jr.
I feel his dream and message were much much more then civil rights for blacks, it was about world unity and equality, the power of love... and his dream, his message, the force of nonviolence applies to today, especially in 2012, the dawning of a new age
What do you think about the video?
Do you agree with me about MLK's message?
How does MLK's message apply to current times?
Please please please comment, it means so much to me to have some comments.
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http://www.youtube.com/user/Cosmicjokester1?feature=mhum
Check out my channel and if you want to explore further into my point of view, my website is linked on some of my videos depending on which one you watch... and maybe if we get in contact, you can be a friend of me on facebook.
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cbub
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Re: My new spiritual video, martin luther king rap, 2012 spiritual revolution! [Re: Cosmicjoker]
#15795836 - 02/11/12 11:50 PM (3 months, 15 days ago) |
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Hey Eric, you stayed up long for this one 
I love how you synced the music and his speech, it came out great,
The message is inspiring and well put together.
Turning the volume down for your voice to come in, ruins the whole thing quite a bit, try for another solution.
You have a good rapping voice, but lack the practice imo.
thank you man, great effort 
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White Beard
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Re: My new spiritual video, martin luther king rap, 2012 spiritual revolution! [Re: Cosmicjoker]
#15796091 - 02/12/12 01:52 AM (3 months, 15 days ago) |
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Nice beat and flow! Next time, rap longer.
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Cosmicjoker
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Re: My new spiritual video, martin luther king rap, 2012 spiritual revolution! [Re: White Beard]
#15799062 - 02/12/12 04:38 PM (3 months, 14 days ago) |
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Quote:
cbub said:
Hey Eric, you stayed up long for this one
I love how you synced the music and his speech, it came out great,
The message is inspiring and well put together.
Turning the volume down for your voice to come in, ruins the whole thing quite a bit, try for another solution.
You have a good rapping voice, but lack the practice imo.
thank you man, great effort
its the voice of a frined of mine and I boosted the volume of it as much as I could... I am not one to remake my videos after they are uploaded, I didn't feel it ruined the whole thing, but of course you are entitled to your opinion and thanks for being honest. I watched it again and again, the transition to the rap section is a little akward at first but then it flows good but not great... and still will reach a lot of people who will not get caught up in a slight audio imperfection and feel the video, enjoy it and get the message. I am glad you liked my friends voice but not sure what you mean by lack of practice, in what way is his rap show lack of practice.
Yet I am one those people who always falls in love with anything I create through editing... so my view is clearly biased, lol
Your welcome!
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White Beard said:
Nice beat and flow! Next time, rap longer.
I think my friend who rapped this would enjoy hearing this comment, because it means he did good and left you wanting more...
What did you think of the message? Did it come across?
And what about the comment above yours, did you think the audio of the rap was distracting or ackward or whatever... or did it work fine in your mind?
Anyway,,, looking at these above two comments, it just goes to show... that beauty of art depends on the beholder...
I am sure as this video gets out there, a dozen or so people will think this video is the best thing since sliced bread... who knows?
But the views on the video are climbing pretty slowly for some reason, it's only been up not even a day, but usually my videos climb the view count faster...
Oh well it's not about quantity... if one of my videos only effects ONE person in a positive way... just one person... it was worth it... perhaps you are that one person, for now... only 20 or so views on youtube so far.
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http://www.youtube.com/user/Cosmicjokester1?feature=mhum
Check out my channel and if you want to explore further into my point of view, my website is linked on some of my videos depending on which one you watch... and maybe if we get in contact, you can be a friend of me on facebook.
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cbub
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Re: My new spiritual video, martin luther king rap, 2012 spiritual revolution! [Re: Cosmicjoker]
#15800978 - 02/12/12 10:44 PM (3 months, 14 days ago) |
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in what way is his rap show lack of practice.
There doesn't seem to be a lot of emphasis on rhyming syllables. He sounds mellow, either as if he didn't care much about the message or he's stoned. You know that umpf! 
Really, I could give you some nice wrapping of I like it a lot(and I do), but this is to improve, it doesn't lack much to be super awesome.
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Cosmicjoker
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Re: My new spiritual video, martin luther king rap, 2012 spiritual revolution! [Re: cbub]
#15802863 - 02/13/12 12:05 PM (3 months, 14 days ago) |
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cbub said:
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in what way is his rap show lack of practice.
There doesn't seem to be a lot of emphasis on rhyming syllables. He sounds mellow, either as if he didn't care much about the message or he's stoned. You know that umpf!
Really, I could give you some nice wrapping of I like it a lot(and I do), but this is to improve, it doesn't lack much to be super awesome.
He is redoing the audio for me, and adding another rap verse, and doing the rap over... because he loved it, but also wants it to be super awesome... so stay tuned because I am eventually gonna do a remake!
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http://www.youtube.com/user/Cosmicjokester1?feature=mhum
Check out my channel and if you want to explore further into my point of view, my website is linked on some of my videos depending on which one you watch... and maybe if we get in contact, you can be a friend of me on facebook.
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 c0sm0nautt
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Re: My new spiritual video, martin luther king rap, 2012 spiritual revolution! [Re: Cosmicjoker]
#15805290 - 02/13/12 07:22 PM (3 months, 13 days ago) |
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Excellent video my friend, gave me chills.  I read some of Dr. King's stuff in college and he was truly ahead of his time. Love his stance on mostly everything. Well put together video, looking forward to the next one.
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The intuitive mind is a sacred gift, and the rational mind is a faithful servant. We have created a society that honors the servant, and has forgotten the gift. - Albert Einstein
  
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