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 opiatej
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 Poem sort of.... 
#8504908 - 06/09/08 06:45 PM (3 years, 11 months ago) |
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Alright this is sort of a poem I just wrote because my x girlfriend is pissing me off,were still very close and always will be soulmates in the end but as of right now I am still pissed!
TODAY WAS THE FIRST TIME I HAVE SEEN YOU IN A WHILE,
IT'S JUST TO BAD I CAME ALL THIS WAY AND I NEVER GOT
TO SEE YOU SMILE,
I MISS THE WAY YOU MAKE ME FEEL,THE WAY YOU LOVE ME BEST,
IF YOU LOVE ME SO DAMN MUCH THEN WHATS WITH ALL THE TEST?
SOMETIMES I SIT ALONE AND WONDER,DOES ANYBODY EVEN CARE,
IF IT WASEN'T FOR YOU,OH BEAUTIFUL ONE, I PROBABLY WOULDEN'T BE HERE,
IF THIS IS IT AND THATS THE TEST,HOW MANY TRIES DO I GET TO OPEN THIS FUCKING CHEST?
IT SEEMS TO ME IT'S ALMOST NOT EVEN WORTH IT,TRYING TO PLAY THESE GAMES,BUT WITH OUT THE GAMES AND MERRY-GO-ROUNDS,I WOULDEN'T EVEN REMEMBER YOUR NAME,
I KNOW YOUR STILL YOUNG AND YOU WANT TO HAVE FUN,SO GO PLAY WITH THE MATCHES,YOU CAN HEAR IN THE DISTANCE THE
THUNDER BE RUMBLING,AS WE SIT HERE AND BURN TO ASHES,
I was going to use this for my last verse....
I KNOW YOUR STILL YOUNG AND CONFUSED UP A STORM,BUT AFTER ALL THE LIGHTING CRASHES, AND WE BURST INTO ASHES,
DO YOU THINK I COULD STILL WATCH PORN?
I think it's pretty dumb but I like the first verse the best if I had to pick one...
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Boots
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Re: Poem sort of.... [Re: opiatej]
#8505183 - 06/09/08 07:53 PM (3 years, 11 months ago) |
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It's not my cup of tea and the caps make for a really irritating read.
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opiatej
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Re: Poem sort of.... [Re: Boots]
#8505533 - 06/09/08 09:39 PM (3 years, 11 months ago) |
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Ya I see what you mean about the caps,the letters just melt right into each other
Defently needs work!
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gumkeegan
I can relate to my toes
Registered: 02/08/08
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Re: Poem sort of.... [Re: opiatej]
#8505682 - 06/09/08 10:21 PM (3 years, 11 months ago) |
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personally, I don't like rhymes unless there is a strict rhythm they're set to.
-KTM
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