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Wow nice lyrics I believe we need more lyrics and songs to get noticed which give views on the current state of the world, perceptions on what we are and the silly mess of politics. Nice one!
I'm learning to play the guitar, I can't wait to get to the level of playing where I would be able to make complex pieces of art, i hear riffs and solos in my head sometimes I just can't wait till the day I can get it out.
Coming from a strictly musical standpoint, disregarding the political topic of the lyrics, the singing mostly sucked and a lot of the lyrics seemed to as well. The voice sounds cool but there's just a lot of points where the intonation and rhythm of the singing sticks out as bad. I think it just needs a lot more practice and effort. I can definitely hear potential in there.
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Meet me in outer space
We could spend the night;
watch the earth come up I've grown tired of that place;
won't you come with me?
We could start again.
Quote: Coming from a strictly musical standpoint, disregarding the political topic of the lyrics, the singing mostly sucked and a lot of the lyrics seemed to as well. The voice sounds cool but there's just a lot of points where the intonation and rhythm of the singing sticks out as bad. I think it just needs a lot more practice and effort. I can definitely hear potential in there.
Well, consider that this was a first take, and that I hadn't memorized the lyrics yet, so I was reading, which is probably why the vocals sound off. The lyrics are to be taken over time.
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Meet me in outer space We could spend the night; watch the earth come up I've grown tired of that place; won't you come with me? We could start again.
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I can definitely hear potential in there.
