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 A poem entitled 'Cunt Worship'
#7821598 - 01/01/08 08:43 PM (7 months, 30 days ago) |
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Cunt Worship
by Sebastian
Part 1
The slaves of the sorceress
Licking at her wounds
At the open gates to paradise
Instead of tortured tombs
Where, in them, lay
That black and grey
Cold, majestic melody
That held sway
Over drear decay
And plagued me
Until this day...
In her scented gardens
Their breath makes an awful hiss
And in a moonlit waltz
The slaves and the sorceress did kiss
They glide around the curve
To the righteous hole
And bound by the nerve
Of her (un)holy soul
They held, at the reigns,
Her menstrual strains
And once the end had passed
Slipping into a bondage mask
She makes her will the rule
And the slaves below will drool...
What evil did she spawn?
A pentagram is drawn
Across the face of humanity
Her name was screamed
Across the universe and back
What horrors did they dream
Would happen when they signed the pact?
Part 2
The sorceress has become the slave
To her wicked, headless mother
Knowing that, in her grave,
She soon will smother
Upon dark waters
Where the leaves flurry 'round
Held her breath when the slaughter
Soiled and bloodied the ground
But no death came
No, not for her
Still, in the rain,
Fate began to blur...
She walked those dark waters
For most of her life
But now her life totters
On the edge of a knife
Fate holds the strings
For her mother to cut
"How could you betray me,
You little slut?!"
Her flowers are wilted
No more scent in her gardens
The knife has just tilted
But, from mother, no pardons
"This is your fate
You overthrew me
Now, watch the hate
Gather in pools at your feet!"
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 Sunny
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Re: A poem entitled 'Cunt Worship' [Re: Boots]
#7821830 - 01/01/08 09:47 PM (7 months, 30 days ago) |
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 This should be moved into OTD.
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It's in my report.
Peace out, Dm.
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Re: A poem entitled 'Cunt Worship' [Re: Sunny]
#7821994 - 01/01/08 10:50 PM (7 months, 30 days ago) |
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Quote:
Sunny said:
This should be moved into OTD.
yea lol, i read that twice and saved it.
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Boots
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Re: A poem entitled 'Cunt Worship' [Re: SheerTerror]
#7830905 - 01/04/08 07:18 AM (7 months, 27 days ago) |
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What did you two think though? I wrote this when I was 16 and was hoping for some feedback.
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Re: A poem entitled 'Cunt Worship' [Re: Boots]
#7834348 - 01/05/08 01:39 AM (7 months, 26 days ago) |
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Well, it's a lot better than "Weird tales from the dark side" or whatever it was called but not as entertaining.
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Throw out your gold teeth and see how they roll
The answer they reveal - life is unreal
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Re: A poem entitled 'Cunt Worship' [Re: Boots]
#7835337 - 01/05/08 12:26 PM (7 months, 26 days ago) |
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It's a good read. My only criticism is that the title could be a little more clever than "Cunt Worship".
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Sunny
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Re: A poem entitled 'Cunt Worship' [Re: Boots]
#7836640 - 01/05/08 05:47 PM (7 months, 26 days ago) |
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It's clever as a comedic bit. But's not likely to be considered serious material.
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It's in my report.
Peace out, Dm.
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Boots
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Re: A poem entitled 'Cunt Worship' [Re: Sunny]
#7853705 - 01/09/08 01:38 PM (7 months, 22 days ago) |
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The title was really just a way to draw people in. I mean, sure, it ties into the poem itself but it's really a 'grab-and-point' method for me. Anyways, thanks for the input.
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